Reliving a Childhood Dream with Pokémon Go

I’m going off on a tangent tonight – this post isn’t strictly about writing but there is still a link. We’ll get to that later.

Like many others, I’ve been playing this mobile game since release. It’s a fairly simple game. It uses a map and GPS to spawn Pokémon near you. You then throw Pokéballs to catch it. There are different versions of the catching devices that improve the capture rate and various levels of monsters that appear. Travel to different locations and you’ll find different monsters. The game encourages you to go and explore the area – although in some cases, it’s best to do this with others, unfortunately.

I’m not here to review the game, however. There’s plenty of posts for that, and I’m not saying it’s the best game ever – there are faults and great features. This is a little more personal than that.

The nostalgia

Favourite Pokémon so far in Pokémon Go

Favourite Pokémon so far in Pokémon Go

I grew up with Pokémon. I was a part of the generation that fell in love with the games, the trading cards and even the TV show. I’m not ashamed of that. Hell, I still have some of the cards somewhere – they took a while to collect.

As a kid, I was full of dreams. That’s not uncommon. Talk to any child and their imaginations are off in another world. Stories run amok. Rules and conventions go out the window. Its surreal watching and listening to them go – yet I can’t recall exactly what my thought process was like back then. It’s a shame, as I’m sure my already active imagination would be a never ending source of inspiration.

Other than wanting to be a Jedi, having my own Iron Man suit and many others, I wanted to go out and catch Pokémon. The card and GameBoy games were the closest I could get. It was fine but growing up, I realised how silly it was.

It still is.

Yet here I am, 20 years later, actually doing it. Granted, it’s on my phone but I’m going out, meeting people, discovering places I had no idea even existed after seven years in Manchester.

This whole thing has sparked something in me. I’m doing more exercise, reliving a dream and finding motivation for other endeavours I’m working on (the books I’ve been putting off editing). If that’s only thing it does, I’ll still count the whole experience as a win for me.

In the end, it might wear off, but hey, why not enjoy it while it lasts?

The opposing view

An example of the map in Pokémon Go

An example of the map in Pokémon Go

I’ve seen a lot of people bashing Pokémon Go and for the life of me, I don’t understand why. Apparently it’s sad that people walk around staring at their phones – yet we do that anyway with Facebook, Twitter, Snapchat, Instagram etc. We LIVE on phones nowadays, for better or worse.

I’m firmly on the side of Pokémon Go, whether people like or not. It’s done good for plenty of people – why not focus on that?

So here are just a few points I raise to people:

People are now playing games and getting exercise – it beats sitting on your backside playing Candy Crush or that ilk (note: I have nothing against those kinds of games, but I’m not bashing them either.

How many kids have the phones and/or data allowance to play this game properly? Granted, this is becoming an obsolete point but parents also won’t them wander the streets alone at all hours with expensive devices. I hope.

Twenty years ago, most of these kids weren’t even born! If this is aimed at younger generations, why not choose a later generation of Pokémon that they’re more familiar with? The first generation brought the kids in as it’s a brand they know but also mine, as we remember them!

Another note – I realised I could still name most, if not all, of the original 151.

Instead of going out of your way to bash it, decide it’s not for you and move on. Unless people are trespassing on your property or interrupting your life, they aren’t hurting you. Get over it.

Why it even matters

The Gyarados took a long time to evolve...the second one won't take as long!

The Gyarados took a long time to evolve…the second one won’t take as long!

In the end, none of this does. I’ve rekindled something that I hope will help me in the future. It’s spawning new ideas already – although I need to get the books I’ve got in good order before writing more.

More importantly, I feel better. The extra exercise is doing me good (remember that swimming thing I started a while back? It’s still going on) and my jeans are very loose on me now. Woo!

Sure, the game is a bit of a grind but there’s a nice feeling of accomplishment when you get things done – that Gyarados took FOREVER.

I suppose, we just need to focus on the good more than the bad. There’s plenty of both around and it colours how we see the world and the people in it. My writing may be dark at times, but it’s not always negative.

Next time, I’ll be back to writing related posts. Ciao!


Death in Storytelling

I, like many people, love stories. I read books, watch films and television shows, play games, listen to music – all sorts. There are stories everywhere. Growing up, they obviously had a big effect because now I’m an aspiring writer.

One thing I’ve never really considered until recently was death in the stories we read, watch, play, listen etc. It’s always there, sometimes in a small way and others a lot more significantly – even when I was younger. I never had a reason to question it before but now I’m beginning to wonder; are we numb to death in our stories?

Oh, there will be some spoilers coming up but nothing too recent.

Death isn’t unusual

I spent some time reliving a few childhood memories. Purely academic of course, but I found that death is all around us. Despite this, no one raises an eye. Remember, I’m particularly fond of the sci-fi and fantasy genres but death isn’t limited to these subjects. Maybe I expect it more in adult stories than I do children or young adult fiction but nevertheless, it’s there.

Should this be allowed?

Well, it already is, although there are rules to follow, it seems. In adult fiction, there are fewer to follow – and less consequences if the rules are broken. For younger audiences, there are two main rules I’ve identified. Not everything follows this and there probably more but these are two I’ve noticed the most.

Firstly, the death has to mean something. It can’t be an afterthought; it is used to teach a character something – even if it takes a while to do so. It acts as motivation, a turning point, a way to break and rebuild. Ultimately, this is a popular or well-loved character; a mentor, guardian or parent, for example, but not limited to them. It allows characters to reach their ‘coming of age’ stage and then go on to surpass them.

Alternatively, deaths are used to indicate scale. They are minor characters; soldiers in a war, brief acquaintances, villains or monsters that heroes must defeat to complete a quest. They can be likened to an obstacle, wall or challenge that has to be overcome. As we never invest in them, or are made to think of them as evil, their deaths are seen as insignificant. It’s only looking back that I realised just how many there have been.

Beloved franchises

Star Wars: The Force Awakens

Star Wars: The Force Awakens

This happens a lot, so I’m going to list some examples. Again, if you haven’t read/seen/played any of these, spoilers are coming. However, I’ve chosen older titles so don’t blame me.

Harry Potter. I grew up with these books. My feelings are mixed but that’s another story. Harry’s parents are dead before the books begin but throughout the series, key characters die. Sirius, Dumbledore, Snape and Lupin are core characters to Harry and help develop his character. Voldemort is the villain to overcome but wizards, witches, Death Eaters and muggles all die throughout the later books. Pretty grim, really.

Even the Marvel Cinematic Universe hasn’t escaped. Avengers Assemble killed off a very important character, popular with other characters and audiences alike. This was

Chaos Walking Trilogy

Chaos Walking Trilogy

rectified later, to mixed reactions from what I gathered, but it was a shocking moment. Again, it followed the first rule. Plenty of deaths, both innocent, ‘good guys’ and ‘bad guys.’

Star Wars. Almost every film has an example of this. A New Hope saw Obi Wan die, while in the most recent film, The Force Awakens, Han Solo bites the bucket. The first example is a turning point for Luke Skywalker while Han’s demise will have repercussions we’re yet to fully experience. With war being a common theme, you can see death in all seven films.

I could list some hugely shocking moments here, and I may well do in the future but not tonight. I’d like to point you to Patrick Ness’ Chaos Walking Trilogy as a great example, though. Gamers will probably know the Final Fantasy VII example, which is still a powerful moment almost two decades later. The list is endless. Maybe I will sort something later.

And then there’s A Song of Ice and Fire

ASOIAF - A Game of Thrones

ASOIAF – A Game of Thrones

I left this until the end because it’s one of the most recent, mainstream and popular series around. Unfortunately, that applies more to the TV show Game of Thrones rather than the books. While I could happily and easily dive into THAT debate, we’ll leave it to one side for now.

Death is probably the only thing you can expect in both the show and the books. No one seems to be safe, from minor characters to major, popular to unpopular. George R. R Martin has done well in making readers invest in the characters, even the ones you don’t like, before pulling the rug from under you and killing them.

The series hasn’t finished so we don’t know how it will end but it’s one of the most popular franchises at the moment where death is so prevalent. The deaths are also epic in a lot of cases, which makes them stand out. When I say epic, I mean brutal. Shock tactics galore.

Does this numb us further? That’s something to think on but some people don’t mind it, while others hate it and then the third group love it. It’s always going to divide opinion but that’s just one of the great things about stories.

Picking Your Audience: How Early Should You Do It?

I’ve often wondered about this. Some of you may be sitting there (or standing, depending on what you’re doing) and screaming at me for even asking such a daft question but is it really that silly?

Identifying your audience early shapes the story

Any story begins as an idea. An acorn, if you will, that will grow into (hopefully) a grand old tree. We, the writers, are the ones nurturing this growth from start to finish – and sometimes beyond, even if no one knows about it! It’s rarely a case of ‘this is my idea, no it’s time to get writing’ although even I find that hard to resist.

There’s the research element, looking at similar stories across a range of mediums and the market itself and the planning stages too, from character creation to settings and more. Then there’s the audience. What audience do you want to write for, is it suitable for your story and how can you ensure the two go hand in hand?

These are not easy questions and you may find yourself compromising in one way or another. The risk here is that you may become disillusioned with the entire project because it isn’t what you originally wanted to write, or for who you wanted to write to. That may mean you need to change one aspect to ensure that enthusiasm isn’t going to wane at any point.

The biggest benefit I find working this way is that it gives you a clear goal right from the outset of the process. Some people need that end goal in sight but it can take time nail it down so don’t think you can get past this in just a day.

Your story and writing style determines the audience

The flipside of this, however, is that I firmly believe some writers are better suited to different genres and audiences than others. I’m going to use J.K. Rowling as a partial example; Harry Potter is a phenomenal series but other works, largely adult fiction, hasn’t taken off. I’m not the biggest fan of her writing style, which is down to what I like to read and how I write, but there has to be a reason for that, surely?

I’m not saying she should write more Harry Potter, but maybe that audience is something to consider? We’ll see.

We can all write for different audiences, in different ways and styles but there are some that suit us better, that we feel more comfortable with and everyone, apart from the very best writers, will produce better work in their comfort zone. Even the ‘best’ will be better in their favourite zones but they have found a way to reach a high standard, a believable standard from a reader’s point of view, even outside it.

It’s something I’ve put a focus on over the last few years, writing outside of this comfort zone, focusing on different audiences. I won’t let many people see this stuff right now but maybe one day, I’ll get it to a level that I can be happy with. I’m proud of myself for trying and it does teach me a lot. It’s also why I can understand that some stories and styles just don’t work together.

Some rules are made to be broken but others, not so much.


Like with a lot of topics to do with writing, creative processes and indeed, the Arts in general, it’s all down to personal preference. I don’t think it’s easy to say “I’m going to write a young adult novel” and have it happen – at least not all the time. The project may start out with that intention but if you aren’t able to adapt along the way, I don’t believe that it will get anywhere.

Plans are great but we, as writers, change throughout the writing process. Almost as much, if not more, than the story we’re writing. Another part of this, is also understanding the markets and how they evolve as well. Everything’s connected.

It’s certainly an interesting discussion but not one that’s likely to be settled any time soon. However, that is it from me for 2015. It’s been a year full of ups and downs and I’m going to take a few weeks off over the holidays to recharge and to get ready for 2016. So, whatever your plans and beliefs are, and whatever you have planned over the coming weeks, enjoy it and I’ll see you in January.


How Do You Write?

If you think this sounds like a silly question, then you are right. It is silly on the surface but one thing technology lets us do is the same thing in different ways. It opens up so many options and once you learn to harness those choices, it actually means a lot more people can do the things they want to do than ever before – whether as a career or just for fun.

That’s both a blessing and a curse. You can find some great talent and amazing stories but there’s now so much content being produced that it’s becoming harder and harder to sift through it all, let alone decide what you should spend your time reading (and watching, playing, listening etc).

Writing by word processor/typing

This is probably the most common method in the current world. It’s only going to continue as digital technology grows in importance in our lives.

It’s a lot more environmentally friendly, which is a huge bonus. Being able to make changes to your work easily is very helpful and there are no masses of paper to sort through. Numbering pages is easy, as is making notes and comments. It’s also simple to share with others and get feedback.

If you want to be pedantic about it, this is typing rather than writing but just be glad you don’t have to rely on a typewriter. Sure, some people like it and that’s fine but I’m so used to using a word processor now that it’s hard to think of another option.

Just don’t forget to keep backups. Please keep backups!

Writing by hand

Think about how hard it is to write a book these days. Now, imagine how hard it was to do without the advantages of computers. Scratching out mistakes, crumpling up page after page, manuscripts piled high.

And the wrist cramp. Ouch.

That can’t be just me, surely?

I’m not used to that amount of writing anymore and I do find myself cramping up. It has its uses, definitely. When I’m on the move I always have a pad of paper. Typing it up afterwards is a pain but you do notice little mistakes straight away and that’s useful.

Writing with a quill is also a lot harder than you might think. Seriously.

Writing by dictation

How many had ever thought of this method? How many of you have actually tried it? It may seem like cheating but I think it can be useful – especially if you’re away from a computer/paper – to an extent.

If you have a good dictation machine or recording set up and software to translate audio files into text, you can capture any sudden bursts of inspiration at any time.

Writing a full book this way probably isn’t a good plan, since it’s not so easy to check what you’ve done before and there’s no guarantee wat you say will be translated properly at the moment.

You’ve got to remember, though, that before stories were written down, they were told orally. That’s how stories were told and passed from person to person so there’s some logic to doing things this way. It’s quite an interesting feeling.

Give it a shot.

Any others?

There are probably a hundred and one different ways people write now. Gone are the days when you’re only real option was to use pen and paper. I’ve tried the ones above, with varying and interesting results but if you have any others, feel free to share!

It’s Christmas Time!

Well, almost but who’s counting (10 days – 9 until my holidays start)? So, as you know my NaNoWriMo attempt didn’t go so well and I’ve been a bit quiet lately, dropping down to my normal routine of 2 posts per month. I like this number as I’m not pressured into writing a post – even though I do really enjoy it – and I can put more time into it. I’d love to have the freedom to do it weekly but we’ll see what 2015 brings.

What am I doing?

Well, I’ve not been slacking off…much. I’ve been diving right back into my novella. I’m well into the second draft now and I want to say a BIG thank you to my proof readers, Sami and Kat, for your time and effort. You’re comments are justified and helpful and having combined them with my own next steps, I can say everything is coming along nicely.

I’ll be working on this on and off over Xmas and hopefully have something closer to publishing standard by the New Year or shortly after. Then it comes to submission time. It might not get accepted but I’ll find another way to get it out there if not because I think it’s relevant to many people and hopefully enjoyable too!

What can we look forward to next year?

Well, I have a lot planned. I’m FINALLY going to make a start on the A Song of Fire and Ice series so I can watch the TV show, give you more insights into my writing styles and tips – I get a lot of good comments and feedback so I think I should share what I’ve learned from others and from myself – and even more book reviews, since my reading list is huge at the moment. World Hopping is still going strong too, but they’re Christmas break is also coming up.

I also have some more projects lined up for next year so it’s going to be really busy. You don’t want to miss this stuff so watch this space.

But until then

So, this is me signing off for 2014. It’s been a blast since coming to WordPress and I’m looking forward to more of the same, and better, in 2015. I wish you all a very Merry Christmas and a Happy Hogmanay!

See you in 2015.